|Reviews for Snapshots of a Dreamer's World|
| Highway Unicorn 9/30/12 . chapter 1
Returning the review! :D
I really liked this from the get-go. Since the beginning, you created this nervous tension that made the readers, at least I, think "Is he alone up there?", "Is somebody tailing afterhim?" or "What's he going to do?"
And then you brought in the Nuc, which I thought tied everything in nicely together. You went with the perspective of the pilot who had to drop the bomb, and you delievered it nicely. Overall, this was a great piece that did it's purpose to entertain/bring about emotion to the readers. :D
| Psychobabble6 3/7/08 . chapter 1
That was pretty dang awesome. The imagery was fantastic, along with the language and everything else involved. Everything you mentioned at the end, about just wanting the gruesome description to end ended up working wonderfully, and the whole thing gradually picked up speed as it was read. Very good. I applaud it.
| python862 11/25/07 . chapter 1
I believe that a creative sub-conscious mind is a gift, and it gladdens me to see someone use it to potential.
Very well done.
Have fun - Python