That was pretty dang awesome. The imagery was fantastic, along with the language and everything else involved. Everything you mentioned at the end, about just wanting the gruesome description to end ended up working wonderfully, and the whole thing gradually picked up speed as it was read. Very good. I applaud it.

I believe that a creative sub-conscious mind is a gift, and it gladdens me to see someone use it to potential.

Very well done.

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