" Why, O why did you decide to do this on your own?"

The very question I asked myself after reading this.

WRY

I just stumbled across this story and like it a lot. The second person present is a real bear to bring off, but you handled it very well. The prose is spare, clean, and almost devoid of mistakes.

My favorite part: You collapse upon the icy summit with a dull thud as a darkness grows over your vision. As sleep now claims you, the last thing you feel is the powerful rush of ice and snow blowing viciously through the sky. Ah, the wind in your hair...

I'm a mountain climbing buff, although I know I'll never be among the few who summit Everest. Let me tell you, there would be wrose ways to go.

Thank you for sharing. Nice job!

Well well well. This was quite an interesting read, from second person too. Well, I like original fiction better. lol. This piece was nicely descriptive, tho it didn't feel like it was touching to the reader, like reaching out to the person. Either way, I like how it's done. No mistakes either. Nice.

The one you know as,
::Jynx