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| thecolourgrey 2007-11-25 ch 1,  | abusehaha...the reason i chose to read this story was the title. i simply LOVED shallow sleep by hyde, so i was amused to find a story with the same title. and then to find out that the same story was inspired by the exact same song! anyhow, the story. a short, simple piece. I would have liked more ambiguity as to whether the other person really existed or not, but the story is okay this way too. :) |
| atreyu love 2007-11-25 ch 1, | abusei like it :) but if you expanded it a bit, its a great plot, and would be a magnificent story :) |