I like chapter poetry

again, the repetition is wasted words but the rest of it is great. love the ideas of furniture being ambushed and stalking lamp-posts. the last two lines wrap it up perfectly. good stuff, very inspired. nice.

the concept is good but i thought the first two lines could have been elaborated on more. though it is still effective in it's brevity.

i like the balance of elements and feelings in this one, it makes for an interesting and effective contrast.

aww, that's very pretty. has such an innocent quality. the repetition of 'snow is falling' could have been more creative, though.

Oh, I like this one! I love to draw (though I'm not particularly good) and I found this very clever. Great job! I am also very glad that you didn't end that last line with a preposition. Grammar is important.