Reviews for Opposites Are The Same

shadows of a trackless sea 2007-11-25 ch 1,	abuseI liked it, and your anologies. However, i didn't really think that you ended it well, it almost seems like you stopped before you were finished. But other than tat nicely done.
Smoky Bear 2007-11-25 ch 1,	abusethe idea is there and i long the concept but this just reads as a couple of statements and doesn't feel poetic enough. also the repetition is word wastage. good concept but the poem is worth revising.
Vesta J 2007-11-25 ch 1,	abusebeautiful. i am impressed by our perspective and its backings. there are many other people that say such things like opposites are the same, and what would one do without another, and its all true, but it was often hard to explain. one sentence per line makes the intended impact become seen. i'm not so sure about the last line, though. the 'go hand in hand' part corresponds with the other two sentences, but saying snow and sweat don't seem to be doing its job. to me, it doesn't seem to fit as nicely as the rest of the lines. overall, i am impressed. this is a nice work. no, i am not even close to being an english teacher or some language geek, unless you count someone who likes to write 3 different stories and not have even one of them close to finished :D haha that's me -vesta [the her-procrastination-scares-me procrastinator ;)]