the title attracted my attention, so I decided to read this and I like it a lot "fantasies" remind me of the fairy tales.

poor sierra (cute name, where is it from?)I think, the way about reality and fantasies is interesting, sometimes life is a dream and dream is a life.

specially I love this paragraph: Only a child like this could give the love that had never yet been hurt, as Sierra would be...

that was very heartfelt and I like this line too: Help me find you.

it would be fantastic if you write some sequel.

this story sounds great. keep up the good writing and work.