awwww...

loved it!

nice work!

This is true love.. and haha he knows how to make you moan? nice. Love the poem and all the smily's _

xKristie Mariex

very cute ]

First of all thanks for all of your reviews.. some of them were from some old pieces that I had to look up to see what they were about.. lol... I tend to think my newer stuff is better just btw

Anyhow this piece is really great.. the flow is nice and the smilies at the end of the lines were cute.. I also like the metaphors in there... they were adorable and unique for the most part.. great job

I love this poem, it is so cute.

Write On!

I agree completely with Unfavourite Child, it sounds like a person giddy with love. It was actually interesting to read though, and it even brightened my countenance (I'm not so irritated with homework now!)

Haha so cute ;D

I especially love the "perfect fantasy" line and all the emoticons.

Wonderfully childish!

DeAnna

Okay so yeah, really kinda weird and all what with the smiley faces and everything . . but I rather like it. It sounds like something one would write while feeling a little love-high.