Nicely twisted. I hope to read an update soon. ^_^

Rebekah

I do like this story. Sometimes it seems like the writing jumps a bit. However, it is an original concept, which I enjoy.

Rebekah

Interesting chapter again. Your creativity is amazing.

Rebekah

Wow. Intriguing, to say the least. Sadly, I love stories with blood and gore, so I'm going to continue reading. My poor twisted mind enjoyed every word of your gruesome details. It was so sick! Haha. :) When she cut out her mother's eye, I felt my eye twitch. Very good writing.

Rebekah

wOW! THat was really good! Right from the start, you got me hooked.My only suggestion would be to get rid of the weird chochalate fudge cake thing. Its weird, not funny, and obviously he knows what one plus one is. There were also some spelling errors but those are small, so whatever. But really, I can't wait until you post the next chapter. Let me know when you do.
Please R&R my stories. THanks.

Quite interesting and oddly ironic as well. I am the founding member of the Seven Deadly Sins of Dante on FFN. Our forum is well within the top ten. The Latin names of the seven sins have an incarnation there as well, but they're all trolls of the worst sort.

Anyway, your story is rather disturbing, yet delightfully written all the same. Why is everything in italics though? Was that really necessary? Just sayin' here.

~Sy

(A.K.A. Omniscient Envy)