*sque*
I love love loovveed this!
Thankyou for writing and filling my day with smilless from all the sappyness at the end XD

that was intense...love the way you incorporate colors into the story...the metaphors are very powerful.

Uhm. Well. This is awesome. I just love it. Haha :)
And I like the surprise epilogue better than the original ending. Just had more of a finality about it.
Anyways yeah. Thanks for writing.
Luck:)

I have definitely turned into a big fan of yours, Lain. This was an amazing story. I really fell in love with the characters. Especially Rafe. Him tacking yeah onto the end of almost every sentence is very adorable. xD

I'll be going through your other stories later today.

Fang

So, it felt kind of weird reading this right after my friend's friend killed herself on Thursday, but it was so good I COULDN'T SAY NO. I'd forget the title if I said no.

I'm not regretting reading it either. Oh my goodness. It's one of the best stories I've read in a long time. I loved it. Great job. :)

Thanks. :D lol

~AftG, Maggie

Weird! I have a cold while I'm reading this! Anyway, I think the story is great and I can't wait to read more! ;}

this was a fabulous story. I had to stop reading around chapter ten and leave the house for a day and it sucked! I was supposed to be hanging out with my friends but i couldn't stop thinking about Keegan and Rafe and Brady. But now i finished reading! yay! I loved this piece. absolutely wonderful. You rock.
Peace, Love, Laughter~
Lost~~

Aww bless! Cute ending! Now this makes me HAPPY HAPPY HAPPIIY :D

Am glad Kee told his dad about Brady. And that Brady got suspended. But I feel so flipping sorry for the dude. Is it...only me who does?

I mean, he's a big jerk for doing all that to Kee and Rafe. A big jerk for laughing at and calling Kee a freak after Kee told him he tried to kill himself FOR Brady. And a big jerk OVERALL. But I still feel like maybe there's a reason to the way he acts. Like it's all a shiled to protect himself.

So am gona imagine he changes to be a better man in the future :D Makes a friend who understands him and tells the turth to Brady's face. Theen, Brady becomes vulnerable cos the shield is broken. Then the friend hugs and kisses Brady and they become a cute couple. And Brady is all good and new and un-jerky and opologises and changes and...
*or some rubbish that makes sense* :)

=P Lovely story! The flow of english was just beautiful. And I can’t help feeling like a story about Brady would be nice too *hint hint* LOL XD

Well, looki here. Brady got a good telling off *satisfied*

Though for some strange reason, I feel sorry for the guy. His life is messed up bad (if he said the truth about his childhood) and it seems he can't convey the way he feels when he really...might like Kee.
You know? He'd feel weak and vulnerable if he does admit his feelings, so he acts like a monkey-head to Kee, when in reality he does...maybe love him...? *continues to blabble*

Hmm..or maybe am being to gullible XD

Anyways, thsi chapter is quite nice. Doesn't give off a happy and cheery vibe, but its satisfying :)

Lol lol lol. Its 3:40 AM here, and for some stange reason ( I'll blame it on lack of sleep), I thought Rafe's secret was that he cut of one of his..thingies down there XD XD HAHAHA!

Its all cos when Keegan put his hand down Rafe's boxers, Rafe got mad, which got me (sleepy and foggy-headed) to think of outragous reasons as to what the secret could be XD

God, I betta go and read more. SO ADDICTING!
And am glad kee is kinda getting over stupid Brady. guh.

Wow...
Brady makes me want to kill cute little toddlers. And i LOVE cute little toddlers! Guh!

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...*ehm* I feel kinda better now. Brady is just too much.

~off to read :) I love this fic~

Wow. I can't believe he said that. When I read it I laughed. Not a haha laugh but more of an wow thats un-fucking-believable, semi-hysterical laugh. He probably could have done something less mortifying if he said he got a disease where he shit uncontrollably for five months instead of saying he tried to kill himself for Brady. There's really nothing worse than saying you failed to kill yourself...its pretty much the greatest failure. Although he tried to do it the hardest way there is since you have to fight against natural instincts. Its really amazing actually that he nearly suceeded. Still despite my slight derisiveness the story is just what I was looking for. Something angsty with a huge bastard. So A++. I love it even if suicide pisses me off, lol, somehow I find stories that piss me off the best.

Great story...nice ending too.
Although i do think it was a little unrealistic that after two months Keegan would be friendly with the man his mom cheated with and be friendly with his mom after knowing that she didnt want them and after having to witness his father and sister crying b/c her. (that situation with his mom is just something that ive witnesse first hand and i know how traumatic it can be on a teenager)

I know its his mom and all, but things like that take a lot longer than two months to get over, i can understand Julie being okay with it b/c she is young and needs a mother figure... anyway other than that great story.

Its been a while since i've read a story without and cliches in it, that was actually original

His mom is really a female dog...she left her kids fore some man and didnt even want them until she realized Ted was sterile. So how can she just exspect things to just be fine and dandy. I know ppl with family issues that are similar and for the relationship with their mother/father to even get to the point where they dont hate them it takes lots of years, and even more years to actually have a good relationship again with their mother/father.

I really hope Keegan will come to his senses and realize that Brady is a jerk-off, its kind of grating that Keegan is acting so dependent...its as if he cant even think on his own and see Brady for what he is.

I really liked this chapter, the whole Keegan and Brady scene was intense :)