i agree with the other reviewers. your words are so powerful and delicate.

the story itself shows everything and could easily be the most memorable thing i have ever read.

I thin I LOVE you.

Sigh. Your words are the most beautiful thing I've ever read.

In a sad, sad, way.

I'm not realy sure what to say except I love this story. Actually, today I was getting antsy, hoping you hadn't given up on it, wanting to read.

This story is going to make me cry.

Its so real, and so sad.

Breathless, I am.

Jez

oh MY GOD! WHY did you stop?

AGH!

I can't wait to read more...

I want to cry. This is so romatic.

I really love your work.

This sounds like the beginning of an amazing piece of art.

Your words are phenomanal.

Your imagery is percise. I can taste the words, the sadness, the hopelessness, the urgent desire to let. it. out.

Beauty never tasted so good.

Very intense and beautifully written. The pain is real and sometimes rather disturbing, but it has the ability to put a picture in your mind that won't go away. The characters feel real, and their emotions are wonderfully apparent.

this was really powerful. i fell in love with gin in just a couple chapters and then she got taken away. in an instant. i like how it was so abrupt. the foreshadowing is good.

great way to begin a story, im kinda really excited for the rest now.