I love your work so much, I know I said this, but it's so...real.
I love it.

Wonderul job. Your rymning flowed easily and nothing seemed forced. ou are very talented because many can not do that. I'm glad to hear that you got over him, it's always hard but it makes us stronger. Nice work.

"you said you love me truly now
it's so ** my part
and how am i supposed to say
there's someone in my heart..."

I know that feeling very well. Great work. Keep up the great writing! d:D