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| SerialXLain 2008-05-18 ch 6,  | abuseWell that's convenient. :O I think I'm kind of confused by this but I think it's okay that I am. Right? Sure thing. :D xo |
| SerialXLain 2008-05-18 ch 5, | abuseI like elf lad. And this made me laugh...a lot...for some reason. " She was dead again" :O xo |
| Chicanery A. Beguile 2008-03-05 ch 5, | abuseInteresting plot twist. Can't wait to see what happens next. |
| SerialXLain 2008-02-22 ch 4, | abuseI should read things quicker... I was confused at first 'cause I forgot what had happened... You really like to kill people, huh? I'm afraid to ever get on your bad side. o_o xo |
| Chicanery A. Beguile 2008-01-19 ch 4, | abuseWHAT THE HELL! That was a really random character killing spree, but OK. And this guy Tau, is he dead or a ghost or what? I'm confused. |
| narcissistic 2008-01-19 ch 4, | abusehaha he killed the people that helped him? |
| heartfeltlove 2008-01-18 ch 4, | abuseAwesome chapter!! I'm really intrested in tau. |
| heartfeltlove 2008-01-18 ch 2, | abuseAwesome story I really like it! |
| SerialXLain 2007-12-17 ch 3, | abuseWHAT IS THIS!? Who's Tau? Hmm? Why are people after Sei? Hmm? HM!? xo! |
| SerialXLain 2007-12-17 ch 2, | abuseRedheads are good. And Ariana's insane. In a good way. The hyper, fun way, **-kicking way. ;-; Everyone's so violent. xD |
| Chicanery A. Beguile 2007-12-15 ch 3, | abuseI should comment more because this story's really awesome! I can't figure out why Ariana would want to keep Sei unless she's in love with him, but it doesn't seem like that quite yet, and I want to know more about this new character Tau. Did Sei become a Kirai or was he born that way or what? and is it curable? And why is he blind? I can't wait for the next chapter! |
| satc 2007-12-13 ch 3, anon. | abusehmm... okay, you mentioned how Sei's hands were tied behind his back but then when the whole blood lust thing starts happening they're suddenly not... either it was never mentioned or i just wasn't paying enough attention. either is a good possibility. good like sleep. in fact, sleep sounds quite the lovely idea right now. very lovely. /-}z (the face has a unibrow! ,^o^; < and that's a yawn!) yes, sleep sounds god... |
| satc 2007-12-13 ch 2, anon. | abuseyay, kitties! wow, people just love beating him up, don't they? poor guy... i like this story so far and now, onto the next chappie! |
| satc 2007-12-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseo... must see more /goes on to next chapter/ |
| SerialXLain 2007-12-13 ch 1, | abuseAGH I REALLY LIKE YOUR CHARACTERS ALREADY. /caps lock lovelovelove xD xo |