Oh, now you have to update, with such a good story so far! I'd write more but I is too tired.

hmm, says 'Complete' at the top, but it seems as if there should be more chapters? this ending was rather abrupt and left several stray ends. at the very least, an epilogue is definitely in order.

and the dr. poisoned him! how do i know that you ask... well i just watched all of your viddler videos from last year getting ready for my first ever NaNo... and so i thought to myself... i would really love to read that story it sounds great!... m i wonder if she has a fictionpress... and you do... but i would really love to read the rest of this story so if you could put the rest up that would be so awesome! thanks... ALMOST NaNoWriMo!

Well that's convenient. :O

I think I'm kind of confused by this but I think it's okay that I am. Right?

Sure thing.

:D

xo

I like elf lad.

And this made me laugh...a lot...for some reason. " She was dead again"

:O

xo

Interesting plot twist. Can't wait to see what happens next.

I should read things quicker... I was confused at first 'cause I forgot what had happened...

You really like to kill people, huh? I'm afraid to ever get on your bad side. o_o

xo

WHAT THE HELL! That was a really random character killing spree, but OK. And this guy Tau, is he dead or a ghost or what? I'm confused.

haha he killed the people that helped him?

Awesome chapter!!
I'm really intrested in tau.

Awesome story I really like it!

WHAT IS THIS!?

Who's Tau?

Hmm?

Why are people after Sei?

Hmm?

HM!?

xo!

Redheads are good. And Ariana's insane. In a good way. The hyper, fun way, **-kicking way.


;-; Everyone's so violent. xD

I should comment more because this story's really awesome! I can't figure out why Ariana would want to keep Sei unless she's in love with him, but it doesn't seem like that quite yet, and I want to know more about this new character Tau. Did Sei become a Kirai or was he born that way or what? and is it curable? And why is he blind? I can't wait for the next chapter!

hmm... okay, you mentioned how Sei's hands were tied behind his back but then when the whole blood lust thing starts happening they're suddenly not...

either it was never mentioned or i just wasn't paying enough attention. either is a good possibility. good like sleep. in fact, sleep sounds quite the lovely idea right now. very lovely.

/-}z (the face has a unibrow! ,^o^; < and that's a yawn!)

yes, sleep sounds god...