Wow is all I can say. I was very annoyed about the Zack breaking up with Aiden thing. And then Jake randomly being gay. But it all worked out. I really like your story. Really, really liked it.

woo! i'm gna go straight to the last chapter now

i've already finsihed reading this. but i really like the beginning

NO!

He was meant to kiss Zack. Woah, I guess I'm more into this then I thought.

Seriously tho, good job, this is amazing.

I've loved reading this cause you can see how your writing has got better through the chapters :)

Well done, can't wait to finish it now.

Gosh, what a wonderful story.. I really liked it!!. you know this is one of the first stories in which I can place myself. The things Aiden feels and does. They are quite realistic, not so much different as some feelings I felt myself actually (how terrible it feels to fall for your straight (best) friend)… it didn’t end this well for me.. well maybe this isn’t the end yet .. enough whining :P. you know.. you left me really frustrated in the end. Interrupting them again.. arghh!. (maybe you could write an epilogue or something (hint hint).
Anyway keep up the good writing!! (I’ll be watching you).

I'm really happy I came across your story!It was awesome. I can't wait for the sequel and the spin-off.
Well honestly... I'm just excited to read any of your future stories.
:)I really like the way you write.
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I truly loved this story. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. I can't tell you how many times I busted out laughing while reading it. I'm so glad Aiden ended up with Zack, too; I really did not want him to end up with Jake. I have to be honest I treated Jake like an annoying presence keeping Aiden and Zack from being happy throughout the whole story. I also tended to be annoyed by some of Aiden's actions (mainly his obsession with Jake), but I view this as a good thing. A story wouldn't be great if there wasn't a conflict. Some of his actions were very real, imo. This story really did seem realistic (although I feel sorry for anyone plagued by unluckiness haha); that's probably why I enjoyed reading it. To keep myself frm rambling--all I wanted to say was you're an amazing writer, and I will definitely read Bad Luck's sequel and spin-off!

OMG aiden's b-day is the same day as mine. NO WAY! :D

Continuing to love this story. great job!
-katie

Hey,

Let me just say - I LOVE THIS STORY! Love it. I love Aiden's interactions with Zack and I really like the little love triangle that's forming. I also love their bond over music, because I LOVE MUSIC and I like rock bands that I can imagine to be similar to the ones they listen to (alternative rock, pop-rock, punk-rock, all that good stuff) and I tend to have similar music debates with friends and strangers. I love that they're going to a concert because I LOVE concerts. So fun. Here's to hoping they make-out at the concert ;)

Oh, by the way, I just wanted to point out the mistake that you've reoccuringly made that's been bugging me. Whenever you quote something within dialogue, you are supposed to use appostrophes - not a second pair of quotation marks. Here's an example from your story-
NO: ““Why do the good die young”?”
YES: "'Why do the good die young?'" (the question mark should probably be in the quote, but that's something else all together and no big deal.)
Any quotes within dialogue should be quoted in apostrophes! *Never* use quotation marks within quoation marks! Execpt, I heard (random info here) that in Europe they write dialogue by using apostrophes and then to quote within quotes they use quotation marks - crazy, huh? But, anyway, that's off topic and completely irrelevent to your situation! Anyway, I've noticed many mistakes like that in this story, so I thought I'd let you know how to correct that!

Love the story so far - I'm off to go read more! :)

Best Wishes,
Katie
(my name is my e-mail address [without the spaces], feel free to e-mail me any grammar questions about what I mentioned!)

Bah, that ending was adorable. I read this while giving advice to my friend as she attempts to defeat dragon!maleficent in Kingdon hearts, and i appearently kept distracting her with my constant giggling and 'squee's. I absolutely love Zack, have throughout his whole story. hopefully i can get around to some fanart for you. haha

Thanks so much for such an awesome read, and i shall happily await the new stories. ^^

Wonderful story, all the way to the end. and YAY, he's with Zack! *does the happy dance* I can't wait for you to begin the spin-off, I'm assuming it's either Jake or Damien? Or both?
Not sure what to think about the sequel, I usually don't like them because they mess up my cute couples, but I'll reserve judgement until I actually read some of it.
Congrats on finishing the story, 330 pages! wow, that's something to be proud of!

just know i freaking love you for this!

The ending was great. I wish i could have read the original. -hint hint-

yay spin off

“You can’t call yourself a bad person if you hurt people unintentionally. Pain is a part of life, just like everything else.”

I think I like that quote.

Wow, so much drama...who is Aiden going to end up with?

OMG,I wonder who he's going to end up with. huh, maybe Damien. I know I want him to be with Zack, but it seems he'd only be satisfied with a threesome. Anyway, can't wait to read the last chapter!