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| tangerine love 2008-01-04 ch 1,  | abuseme likey the story! wells, i like the description and all 'cause you really bring out what she feels and what the atmosphere is like. but be careful not to describe too much or you'll leave nothing to the writer's imagination. anyways, keep writing! love, marilyn. =D |