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| christiangrl247 2007-12-10 ch 1,   | I enjoyed this story. Your writing style was engaging. I am always moved when I contemplate the man that Joseph must have been; meditation upon his character makes me love my future husband more, and it helps give me patience to hold out for a Christ-built warrior-poet. My only suggestion would be that you expand the story a bit. So much detail could be covered in the chain of events you described. |
| Sesshoumaru-0086 2007-12-04 ch 1, | A very beautiful story of Nativity! I especially loved the romance between Mary and Joseph! Again a very beautiful story! |