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Reviews For: Mother Nature's Power

Needa S
2008-01-31
ch 1,
abuseWow! Beautifully done. Excellent job. Write on you are very talented.
simpleplan13
2007-12-19
ch 1,
abusethe rhyming is nice and the imagery is beautiful and powerful..I love the eerie tone..and the personification of mother nature
Alexandria Smith
2007-11-27
ch 1,
abusewow, so much to say. Ok, first, I absolutly LOVE it. Second, is it is NOT cliche at all. The diction and imagery are absolutly breath-taking. I got so into this, and your right, it almost is suspensful. wow, and you did an excellent job on the rhyming, I don't think this poem could have gotten any better. You are such a talented and skilled writer. Dang, it makes me jealous... and your even younger than me (hehe) I don't know what else to say but keep up the good work. This is DEFINATELY going on my favorites. What a piece of art... simply amazing. Gosh, and amazing, stunning, breath taking... doesn't begin to descibe this poem.
I'd love to see more of this. This of you deep in there, capable of writing these MASTER pieces.
EXCELLENT job, keep up the... well keep the poems coming. (no words can descibe this poem) *shakes head* nope, none.
Ok, well, Love you.
Ali
daisy dreams.
2007-11-26
ch 1,
abusetwin! this is really great, your word choice and metaphors are amazing.

im definately favoriting this =]
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