Poor woman! The point of view is quite nice and certainly original, at least to me, and yet I can understand why she is feeling everything that she claims. The change in styles towards the end is especially nice, but I would advise that you use a similar technique to differentiate between Red and her mother in the beginning, but just to make it look like a dialogue-- it's clear that when the voice is snobby and teenager-ish, Red is speaking. ANywho, I'm adding this to my Fractured Faerie Tale C2- if this bothers you, PM me and I'll remove it.
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