:( this is so sad

i love you... and i'm sue she does too...

*hugs*

see ya at school

love ya to pieces

casi

Wow, I can totally relate. I don't know if we're talking about the same thing... but I understand completly

'I know it's hard.

But please.

I already hate myself enough for it.

You don't have to hate me for it too'

Love that line. Adding to favs. Great work!

Kristie Marie

This is very good. I can totally relate to that poem. It really conveys how I feel right now.

Excellent.

I like this piece... I'm sorry about whatever youre going through but the way that you wrote this is very meaningful and personal to me...

This is an amazing poem. Everybody wants to know at least somebody cares about them, and the times when there is or it seems there is nobody who cares are very hard. It leads to struggling for acceptance by somebody, anybody, and that's exactly what I myself am trying to avoid. I find strength in your poem though, it's not hopeless, it's a cry for help from who you wrote this poem for. I hope they listen.