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| Isca 2008-06-06 ch 1,  | abuseI liked the 4th stanza the best! Keep up the good work! |
| about.us. 2008-02-10 ch 1, | abuseI like this a lot! The descriptions were very effective in getting your thoughts across, I thought. |
| Alighted Rose 2007-11-27 ch 1, | abuseIt's a good piece... |
| Professional Dreamer 2007-11-26 ch 1, | abuseI like the similar pattern to each verse, and I especially like the last verse. |
| Psychotic-Benevolence 2007-11-26 ch 1, | abuseI know how that is. You rendered your poem beautifully. More descriptive than most I've seen. Great job :) |
| Duuude 2007-11-26 ch 1, | abuseThis is beautiful, I really like it. Going to my favourites for sure. =] |