I liked the 4th stanza the best! Keep up the good work!

I like this a lot! The descriptions were very effective in getting your thoughts across, I thought.

It's a good piece...

I like the similar pattern to each verse, and I especially like the last verse.

I know how that is. You rendered your poem beautifully. More descriptive than most I've seen. Great job :)

This is beautiful, I really like it. Going to my favourites for sure. =]