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| Butterflies and Belladonna 2007-11-26 ch 1,  | abuseA perfect mix between horror and beautiful description. I only found one problem: The siren song sang strong to call to sobbing souls This is a bit of a tongue-twister; too many words beginning with S. It sort of stands out from the rest. |