your poem's so sweet! :) there is so much poems on broken friendships around (i admit, i write them too), that sometimes something other than that would be nice. Good job!

its cool that you are willing to write about the good and the bad, that is a true writer, like how not every book has a happy ending, and not every word has a meaning, it works well

:p I was just about to comment on the cornyness but then I saw your authors note. lol. Cool job. Write on!

~Anna~ ^_^