I ADORE IT!

I noticed you haven't updated in a while, PLEASE do! Your story is one of the better ones I've read on this site, and I would hate to see it left unfinished.

I like your writing style, and the characters. Besides the usual typos, I noticed only two major goof-ups: one, at the carnival, when Jackie's father wanted to meet Andre- they had already met in the aftermath of the fire; and two, Alphonso watching The Labyrinth twice, and the second time being when Jackie makes him watch it for the 'first' time.

ItCC doesn't remind me of Romeo and Juliet much at this point, but please, please don't make it a tragedy and kill them off, or worse, break them up. I like this better that Romeo-Juliet anyways, because, seriously who falls in love at the age of fourteen and in the span of, what, two days? Atleast you've got the build-up.

Casanova? Could it be Dante? But I can't think of a motive. Or Adam? He seems suspicious, but only because you introduced him so late into the plot...

Oh, and the end bit made me laugh: does Sergio always have an extra pair of pants on him to give to Alphonso when he, ehem, dirties his own? Ha.

love love loved this! read it all in one sitting, i couldn't back away from the laptop. awesome story, cant wait to read more of it.

So when I started this story I thought it was complete... now I am dying to read the rest! Please Update I love the story and its really well written. I know its unlikely since its been like a year but DO IT

Your story is the most amazing thing I've read on the net. You should really continue it because it is getting really good. I love your characters jackie is hilarious.

i love this story!! i seriously cant wait for the next chapter, so i hope its soon!!

Wow! I'm kinda confused on what happened at the last part. Love the story!:D Well done. Update soon?

Okay, so the other day i was thinking "She really hasn't updated in a while" so to punish you I decided I would re-read the whole story...Yeah, my friend couldn't see the logic either. Oh well, I think the message from all of your adoring reviews is clear, please please update soon!

One of the best stories I have ever read. Hands down!
Please Please Please Please update!

Ahh, update please! ):
I've probably re-read the existing chapters about 10 times. I just can't get enough of this story.

I LOVE.!
this is thee **.! :D

OMG! I LOVE YOUR STORY! I LOVE IT!! ok sorry..aw...please update a soon as u can. I will be awaiting an update in inbox..keep up the great work

I dont really believe in going too fast or too slow, everyone and every relationship has its own pace!

I really like this story! I started reading this just yesterday but im already impatiently waiting for an update :p

omgg you have to update

Idiot mother? Okaa-san...I "san" is for respect and baka is like "idiot"...

Anways, I love the story so far.

-Im Just M!ssudaztood