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MCakaWriterGirl
2008-07-25
ch 8,
abusegreat chapter you need to tell me who she ends up with please because i feel like i know but then something happens to make me feel like she isn't going to end up with that person. please update soon.
ejabblue
2008-07-25
ch 8,
abuseAhh this is so good! Update, please. For my sanity. :D
jenjen-0
2008-07-25
ch 8,
abuseYes! Another awesome chapter :D Love the interaction between all the characters, it's really funny!
ChemicalxDisturbance
2008-07-25
ch 8,
abuseOkay, once again a great chapter! but if jackie and alphonso don't end up together i will NEVER read and review ANY of your work and you'll be on my HATE list. not a good place to be. no pressure though! =D
Ck90
2008-07-25
ch 8,
abuseI must say that you are just plain evil if Jackie does not end up with Alphonso! I mean they are just so cute together like Romeo and Juliet with a happier ending. THink about it you could be responsible for giving deprived romantics the ending that they always dreamed of fo Shakespeare! Back to the main point. I would have been worse than Jackie if my mom would have done something like that I would have yelled and for the dramatic exit I would thrown something preferably a gift that she had got me, gone to my room and packed for some days and then I would have left for Alphonsos house. Just EW! Anyway I loved the Update! It was very entertaining and stated in the beggining of this review I love those two! UPDATE SOON!
Jevanminx
2008-07-25
ch 8,
abuseOh gotta love Pride and Prejudice, hehehehehe.
JM
emotionless-stares
2008-07-24
ch 8,
abuseOmg, this chapter was so exciting lol. Aha! I knew that it was Clement's dad. But hey, he's good looking so that's a plus. Oh, and ENGAGED! That's really surprising. EIGHT MONTHS! But then again, that's what she's kinda doing with Alphonso.

Lol, it was funny when she said that she practically participated in incest since he kissed her even though he knew that they were going to be step siblings. I hope that she tells Natalie and Sofia soon about her relationship with Alphonso. I mean, I hope that their friendship doesn't crumble because of that.

Oh, and it's cool that Sergio took her to Alphonso's house. He's a nice guy lol. And Haruka really is an enigma. It's like she has secrets that even her closest friends don't know. I wonder if she's part of a gang or something.

Mrs. Venturi is so nice lol. Giving her sweatpants and a baggy T-Shirt. Oh, and it was funny when Dante commented that she looked better in a school uniform. Alphonso is so awesome. He's so cool that he said say the word and Dante will be dressed in a clown suit. He really wants to cheer her up eh? I really want to meet someone like Alphonso. He's caring but then again, there's a dangerous side of him as well.

Oh, and I was all giddy when she said no sex talks unless it's about Mr. Darcy and the all the guys looked at her even made it more funny. She called him a sex god! The fact that she would jump him in a second made Al jealous eh? He turned off the tv! lol I've never seen Pride and Prejudice but a lot of people said it was good. I wonder if the book is good too.

It's funny that she asked why Alphonso couldn't be more like Mr. Darcy. o0o, I wonder why Sergio was blushing slightly. Oh, and that fact that she thought whether or not he was a lucky or a poor guy was funny. It's cute that they cuddled on the bed.

Oh, and it's cute that Fedele has a crush lol. I wonder why Jackie is so scared to talk to her mother. It's nice that Alphonso comforted her. Maybe she's scared because she doesn't want to face new changes in her life. I mean, she was already mad that she thought her dad was dating Addison so that fact that her mom just told her that she got engaged must have set her off. I hope that she likes Andre. He seems like a nice guy.

Please update soon! I love your story lol.
Lady of Confusion
2008-07-24
ch 8,
abuseOMG! I LOVE YOUR STORY! UPDATE ASAP!
Fadeaway Forever
2008-07-22
ch 7,
abuseHoly *! This is by far the BEST story I have ever read! I'm not even kidding either, there is so much going on and everything. WOW is all I can say. You really have a talent for writing! I think I might have an idea about what is going on... I think it was Clemens's dad sleeping with Jackie's mom because in the earlier chapter when Jackie's mom saw her daughter had a hickey and asked who it was and when Jackie said Clement DuBois and her mom was kind of surprised. This story is amazing! Please update soon!

Lexii
Ck90
2008-07-19
ch 7,
abuseDAmn! UPDate SOON!
hazza1508
2008-07-18
ch 7,
abusegreat chapter loved the rushing to mothers side only to find she doesnt exactly need any help lol. Loved that the update was quick keep it up this stories amazing and i cant wait for more
Lady of Confusion
2008-07-18
ch 7,
abuseUPDATE SOON! I LOVE YOUR STORY! IT ROCKS!
Crimson-Embers
2008-07-18
ch 7,
abusepolice car?
aha, is this someone related to DuBois? Because that would work out perfectly if they became related ahahaha
loved it!
:)
MonkeyMohawk1
2008-07-18
ch 7,
abuseAwesomesauce man pure awesomesauce drenched all over it! =] You inspire me to eat my crackers with a smile cause i have no food! omg UPDATE as soon as possible i must knoww! and omg i'd faint too if i caught my mom doing it...and i have and let me tell you...i may not have fainted but i did run into walls tryin to get away..heh..=[

GREAT STORY WRITE MORE! IF NOT FOR ME FOR THE CRACKERS =]
emotionless-stares
2008-07-18
ch 7,
abuseAH! So freaking gross! I mean, catching her mom during sex. So gross lol. I think it's Clement's dad huh? Anyway, it's kinda funny that her mom and her were fighting. I kinda feel sorry for Jackie because she felt really mad that her dad might be liking Addison.

Anyway, update soon! I want to know what happens! Lol.
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