this story is really good.

its getting a little confusing, but please continue!!

xx

p.s. what the hell is raine?

This is really interesting! I like the character's - they have a lot of personality.

Hey :]
So I noticed you haven't updated in a while so I thought I'd leave you a review. Dont worry, I'm not going to beg for an update, seeing as you're probably really busy and hell, I know what that feels like.
Firstly I wanted to say that I love everything about this story, the characters, the setting, the details...
I read the original version of it, so I'm really excited to see what has changed in this version.
I hope you will at one point carry on with this story, because I think it's amazing, and really well written.
Keep up the good work x.

I never review but i liked your story a lot so im doing an exception...i liked your drawnings to and i wanted to ask you if i could use one in my fotolog?

That chapter was awesome, can't wait for more =]

I hope you update soon, I'm really enjoying the story thus far.

Good chapter, I really liked it! The plot is thickening and I love where this is going. Keep it up and update soon!
Faith

This is great, I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep it up =]

This story has captivated my imagination and interest.
I have just started readying your story. I haven't read the original version, though i don't see the need to, although i am sure it is good, i am very happy to just read the workings of you current and 'edited' story.
I like your characters they seem rounded and fleshed out, your descriptions are very detailed, but at the same time still leaving your audience to use their imagination.
Well done and good writing.
I think and hope this story goes far,
update again soon.

jess

Hope you update soon!

Very good chapter. I loved it. Keep up the wonderful work!
Faith

i really like it. Its better than the first version...more polished maybe? The character are developed better as well. I also like how you deepenned christians accent...it sounds cool =)
looking forward to the next chapter

I hope to see an update soon :)

I'm enjoying the story so far, lol, and I think it's great you gave him the traditional 'vampire accent' that most of the older movies/stories have. Transylvania FTW.

Anyway, can't wait to read more ^_^

Amazing update. I loved how long it was! Very, very good story so far. I cannot wait to see what happens next, so update asap!
Faith