I loved the last line! Wow, amazing. Need I say more?
p.s. I finished True Liar.

Aaw. Sad...but true I guess. I love how poetry puts things into perspective in a fancy way, and you did that fabulously. Well done.

Hi! I just reviewed your story and wanted to see if you'd written anything else!
And here something else is.

I liked it. Especially the "my knight in shining armour, king of the superficial part"!
Nice. =)

lovely.
I liked this alot.
Love the emotion and the format of it.
very good! =]

~silent

ohh! i like it! it actually has a POINT! point? OHH! WHERE?
...never mind...
Anyways its short and i usually go for the more rhyme-y ones but i actually like it!
...YAY!
XxCrossMyHeartxX

Aww.. this is cute. Well, not cute, but.. yeah. Nice poem. =)

hmm. i like the last two lines. and as for the boy...i always say that after i go out with three or four charming bastards who burn me, THEN i'll go out with the nice boring one. sigh. haha. sometimes you just can't win...

No, not lies, just misunderstood fate.
No, not gullibility,
It's your undying love bond faith.

Well written :) Though I'm no knight in shinning armor, you'll have to do with a simple review from a knight in tarnished armor :) Good work