 In the Rye 2007-11-26 . chapter 1it doesn't really sound as emotional as i would have thought if you were writing to an ex lover. it seems too thought out. or too well written. don't get me wrong, good writing is appreciated, but it felt like it came from a thesaurus, not from a person. |
 Calicien 2007-11-26 . chapter 1I have nothing against bisexuals. That's why I read this letter. And I felt YOU in the letter. I believe relationships should grown in love, and less in lust - no matter what the gender preferences are.
Nice work. If I would receive a letter (whatever kind of letter), I hope it'd me as creative as this letter. :D |