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| Which Mistake am I 2008-03-24 ch 1,  | abuseI like this!! :D |
| burning in effigy 2008-01-03 ch 1, | abusereally enjoy the metaphor with the snowflake; something that will melt and fade away love the imagery and the alternating thoughts (especially the reference to a pedestal) sorry for not reviewing back for so long; real life's taken a lot of time great poem :] |
| Ashelin 2007-12-07 ch 1, | abuseOh, that is so sad. I feel like that's all I say. "Sad" That's not even a descriptive word. I know what this feels like, but I can't describe it. I guess that's why you wrote a poem, huh? Anyway, I'm sorry. I know that means nothing, but I am. Being alone with nothing but voices and thoughts and no one else really knowing what you know and think and feel is horrible. I'm sorry, I know. And I'm also sorry for not really being here. I just...I feel so untalanted. All the time. I don't even know why. Thanks for always supporting me though. It means a lot. :] |
| Daiysis 2007-11-28 ch 1, | abuseO, I love this! I especially love the title... I think thats what drew toward it the most. Your title indicates a sense of being unique, but the poem goes back and disputes with the thought and actually states how everyone is the same... a paradox is what I call it. A lovely one too. |
| IdeasInTheAir 2007-11-27 ch 1, | abuseScary. And well done. I like kind of the inner voice, telling her what to do. Tres chic. Adds a nice touch. =) Good job, keep writing! ~Danielle=) |
| perpetual questions 2007-11-27 ch 1, | abuse"Everyone staring, nobody caring" - my favourite line. Good job, but what's the point of saying that? It's always true with you. |