ohgoodness.
i like this a lot.
'and pretend we arent heading home.'
very nice :]
uhm, this might seem strange,
but it was sort of... calming.
just the thought of all those things you metioned in the poem;
the imagery.
calming.
yeah.
goodgoodgood :]
xbreanna

You have a beautiful, simple, almost lyrical style... it fits this poem perfectly. Will be reading more from you.

Leila