ohgoodness.

i like this a lot.

'and pretend we arent heading home.'

very nice :]

uhm, this might seem strange,

but it was sort of... calming.

just the thought of all those things you metioned in the poem;

the imagery.

calming.

yeah.

goodgoodgood :]

xbreanna

You have a beautiful, simple, almost lyrical style... it fits this poem perfectly. Will be reading more from you.

Leila