|Reviews for expectations of a moment|
| Moondog Dozier 1/5/08 . chapter 1
The rush and the consistency of sound ushers this along, so the reader gets swept up in the progression. Supurb burst of visuals. Well done. MD:77.
| notated descant 11/27/07 . chapter 1
Breathtaking. I think we all need more moments like these in our lives. I love the mix of poetry and prose, and the line in the parentheses "sh, it's shushing you to sleep". Beautiful.