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expectations of a moment
Moondog Dozier
2008-01-05 . chapter 1
The rush and the consistency of sound ushers this along, so the reader gets swept up in the progression. Supurb burst of visuals. Well done. MD:77.
notated descant.
2007-11-27 . chapter 1
Breathtaking. I think we all need more moments like these in our lives. I love the mix of poetry and prose, and the line in the parentheses "sh, it's shushing you to sleep". Beautiful.
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