This poem is really good. I can't believe i'm the first to review! I really love the situation you have described, and it is described so well! I can see, in my mind's eye, exactly what you are writing about. Very nice work. I have to say though, that there is very little punctuation in this poem, and that interrupts the flow of it a little bit. Perhaps this was done on purpose? I don't know, but that is the only thing that is wrong with it. I love the ending, it pulls everything to a close. Nice work! Keep writing.
~BJ
p.s: thank you for the review on "running" i really appreciate it.