Reviews for Sharing Rooms Working Title

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SnowSkittles 2008-06-10 ch 11,	abuseCute!
The Bloody Sponge 2008-06-10 ch 11,	abuseInteresting. It would seem that you draft your stories in Gmail, no? Clever. At times, during some descriptions, you sound really mature. I was able to coherently understand who fell on who... always a plus. Perhaps my only critique is the pacing... it goes rather slowly. I don't know if all your chapters are relevant to advancement, but at least the majority are entertaining.
hypa to hell and back 2008-06-10 ch 11,	abuseit was good i so missed this heehee. its really good im glad you updated :)
shy green rock 2008-06-10 ch 11,	abuseSuch a long wait! Uhm I'm really glad that you updated and that they flirted, that was flirting right? The mountain of bodies is awesome haha
shy green rock 2008-04-04 ch 10,	abuseFunstuff.
russlove 2008-03-21 ch 10,	abuseO! I love it! Update soon!
eternalfreedom 2008-03-21 ch 10,	abuseHI! I loved how you finished it...I hate your internet connection btw. BUT I LOVE YOU! YO MA BEST FRIEND! AND I LOVE YOU! Okay. I love buffets. Did he get pudding? I like pudding too. And now that you've finally got your long-awaited next chapter out, I have a feeling you're gonna make me do one of mine. sigh At least I have...like...a few weeks before you can physically harm me if I don't. XD Kbye.
LethargicLove 2008-03-21 ch 10,	abuseWoah, it must be so weird to be 17 years older than your sibling. That's crazy, haha. I love Addie, she's such a cute person haha. By the way, Addie is older than Jonas, right? But how old is Gabe?
hypa to hell and back 2008-03-21 ch 10,	abuseha i love this chapter its funny i love the ending fantastic sounds like me when im hungry and i guess its ok if you stay up late but dont do it to often ok^_^ loved it pplease get some inspiration and really itsa ok if you takew along time coz thn atleast one of my favs wont be finishing soon hehe
starzdestiny 2008-03-21 ch 10,	abusepretty good...keep going!!
theflyingcrabsareeatingmyha... 2008-03-21 ch 10,	abuseAww, and I sat down to read these twenty thousand pages with the hope that by the time I caught up, there'd be some romance! Oh well. I'll stay posted! If I were a good person, I'd give you concrit right now, but it's quarter after three in the morning...O.o I don't think I can make it. I always try to give nice reviews, but I just can't do it now...and I really want you to see tons of reviews and be inspired to keep writing this. I'm hooked! Ah...I'm sorry...the please update reviews are my least favorite because they don't tell me anything about why the reader liked it, or what could be improved, or anything. Well, I guess I can always PM you a review when I get a chance to make a good one. ;)
theflyingcrabsareeatingmyha... 2008-03-21 ch 8,	abuseAddie Addie Fofaddie!Me my mo Maddie! Addie! Eh, it's three in the morning here. I don't want to ruin my chance to give you good reviews later by filling all your chapters with this crap,but at the same time, I want you to come back to see a bunch of fresh reviews! Even if they are all from the same person ;) You've got such a unique combination in Addie. Amazingly enough, you take things that would be cliche in another's hands and mold them into something special! I'm so impressed! Keep going!
Not Dead Fred 2008-03-21 ch 10,	abuseI hope he didn't choke...I would have in that situation...and the choking would cause a coughing fit...which would trigger an asthma attack...and I wouldn't be able to find my inhaler cause I never can when I need it...and then I'd die...unless my parents had one of my extras... Yeah, how old are his parents?
theflyingcrabsareeatingmyha... 2008-03-20 ch 5,	abuseStill cute... and now you're doing one of my favorite things ever for these high school romances: including more than two characters!! Plus you're giving them all distinct personalities. I love it!
theflyingcrabsareeatingmyha... 2008-03-20 ch 2,	abuseI know, it's supposed to be a no-no to have the cliche of a boy and a girl ending up together despite the fact that they're originally less than fond of each other, but I'm a sucker for cliches. Epecially when they're cute like this! Gee, Addie... we're going to be so tight at the end of this! Plus, Gabe suddenly seems deep and thoughtful as opposed to a shallow ** who laughs at house fires! Wow. I'm a little curious about why he laughed in the first place, but as I'm only on the first chapter, I'm sure all will be revealed soon.

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