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| hypa to hell and back 2008-07-25 ch 1,  | abusei notice you hav a thing for fruitd cake but we like fruit cake heehee i like this one is very entertaining. wow i loive them all not that i have read them all but i will get round to it |
| Frozen.by.Sloth 2008-07-17 ch 1, | abuseYo. I just read it, and it was far from boring. I really enjoyed reading it, and it was as amusing as it was interesting, I loved it. Great job, thanks for sharing. Enjoy da life~ |
| Beyond-the-Shadows 2008-07-16 ch 1, | abuseHaha lol i like it! |
| stunninglyaverage 2008-07-13 ch 1, | abuseMan. Why can't I have people like that pick up the phone when I prank call? |
| Zonne 2008-03-12 ch 1, | abuseI liked it. There were a few bits that could be modified, like the "but you know what?" there at the end. Too out of character and out of story. Yeah, it was long, but fun. I like her sarcasm and temperment and her friends are so well defined. And the fact that you barely gave any description of how people look and still built strong characters, that's excellent. |
| abyssgirl 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abuseit was good... but went really weird towards the end. no offence. ~ KJ |
| Georgianna 2008-01-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseAw, this is so sweet! |
| Entice 2007-12-28 ch 1, | abuseAW!CUTE! |
| Tecna 2007-12-25 ch 1, | abuseWow, a great one-shot. Thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Well written, especially the banter, adds great fun to the story. I love the ending, absolutely fantastic! Tecna ;) |
| Random Word Artist 2007-12-25 ch 1, | abuseThe grammar was a little off, but other than that, I loved it! I'm definitely putting this on my favorites. |
| emotionless-stares 2007-12-23 ch 1, | abuselol funny how they liked each other..through phone calls huh? |
| Jevanminx 2007-12-19 ch 1, | abuseHehehehehehehe I do love your oneshots they are so great. JM |
| A 2007-12-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was insanely cute. Good job!:] |
| Maria Regina 2007-12-09 ch 1, | abuseTHAT should've gone for two chapters. I mean, seriously. Yeah. very, very, very long. Saved me download though I suppose. Although Lauren should be taught about stranger danger. |
| x3life 2007-12-08 ch 1, | abuseaw this was soo cute!! haha the title was such a good smart witty clever etc.. choice!! haha =) lovedd itt |