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Reviews For: French Toast On Telephone Wires

Kuradok Evangeline
2007-12-16
ch 1,
abuseHaha, this poem is great.

made me laugh.

Keep up the good work

K, Evangeline
adsaige
2007-11-28
ch 1,
abuseI loved the beginning, but the ending just kinda let me down. I think you can re-edit the beginning if you want me to. Keep writing, I love it, and I'm adding it to my favorite stories list.
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