LMAO loved it :)

your story is really good...are you going to write a story for eve and tyson?

Love it love it love it! :)
Your characters just pop and that's an amazing talent that most author's don't have. Great work!

i want to know who's this guy/ or woman maybe? xD, great chap :D keep going!! see ya

I really like your story so far. It has a nice mix between the romance and the mystery. Keep up the good work!

i've enjoyed your story so far. the characters you created are so lovable especially gabe's entire family, the dogs, and Adrienne. also, your writing is quite good in terms of there being few grammatical errors...and i just wanna say that i think Joanie's adopted son is the killer...dundundun...keep up the good work!

absolutely loving this story! greatly look forward to the next chapter, keep up the great work

Wow. Never expected that. The killer was in the house.. who the frak could it be?! Just when they thought they were safe...

Woah. That was creepy.
I'll be looking forward to the next chapter! :)

Sorry, I kind of suck at writing reviews. :P

Yes, I'm so glad that the mystery is finally under way! All I can gather till now is that Leah was somehow involved in the arson -don't know if she was the one responsible, though. And, of course, that it's a guy, one who knew that Adrienne was staying with Gabe on the very first day itself, knows Gabe's phone number, and has access to his house. The way you described the scene with John McKenna hints at him being the one responsible, but I can't think of a possible motive. His father wasn't involved in his life, so that could possibly be the link. Anyways, since you obviously want the reader to suspect John, I'm not so sure.

Please, please update soon! I love mysteries, and I can't wait to read more.

Don't tell me, Adrienne is going to try to seduce Gabriel? God, I can't wait to read more. But I was a bit confused this chapter: What exactly does Gabe do? I've been wondering since the beginning, but always forgot to mention it. Now that you elaborated on his past a bit, I'm more curious than ever. Did he attend college? How does he support his lifestyle? The meagre jobs that he did before could hardly pay for it.

Also, I thought that Joanie and Leo weren't at home, and that's why Gabe has to go out to buy some food, so how come they're at home now?

Anyways, I like Eve. She seems nice and I think that she plays the supportive sister part well. I'm guessing that there's something in her future with Tyson McDermott? Although I did find it a bit weird when she referred to her brother's voice as being sexy and whisky smooth.

This has turned into a long review full of questions, huh? But I really like this story and I'm just a bit confused.

Pretty serious stuff, these last two chapters. Not that I mind, explains Adrienne and her insecurities. I really don't understand though why Gabriel gave Leah money, a *blank* cheque at that. Considering how angry he was, and knowing Adrienne's history, it just seems weird. He should have just kicked them out.

Also, spotted some typos. Distinctly remember reading about how Adrienne is six and a half feet tall.

God, I actually thought that Jake was Carrie's boyfriend or s'thing, certainly not her dog! Again, loved it; am happy that Gabe finally gave in, and really like that Adrienne knows her mind and doesn't deny her attraction to him. Also really amusing how everyone but Gabe and Adrienne keep deriving secret enjoyment from watching Gabe fall in love with Adrienne -including me, of course. Spotted another typo, though.

Loved this chapter. The drunken-ness, he cute-ness, and most of all, the humour. And Gabe! His frustration is so amusing, almost as much as Adrienne's righteous anger spiels. You really do write well. I'll move on to the next one now :)

I love the parents. They make me smile. I wouldn't mind reading their story, what with all the knocking up and not believing in love "even when it had whacked her right between the eyes". Really enjoyed the phone conversation -which four languages, btw? Irish, English...- and Adrienne's anger -reminded me of Elizabeth's reaction to Darcy's proposal in P&P. I spotted a couple of typos, though, so maybe you should check that out.