Wow. I know that this is kind of an old poem so I'm not sure if you are still checking your reviews but just in case I wanted to say that this is very powerful, and I like it a lot. I agree that the third and fourth lines are the best. Just on little thing, the end should read "lost in a place that I can't reach" (you forgot the a) But I really like that line because I know the feeling of not being able to reach out to someone even when I really want to.

i like this
the third and forth sentances were my favorite
good job :]