I love this...keep writing!

the last reviewer isn't bashing, just being a regular BITCH! obviously doesn't know that poetry doesn't need to ryhme...dumb ass...

anyhoo seeing how this means so much for you! I love it! You can definitly write, so keep going! ]

Well overall, I'm sorry to say that this poem doesn't have much to offer. It doesn't really have a rhyme scheme to it, and it doesn't have anything really important or that sets it apart from other poems. Sorry for bashing.