Okay, so I'm excited already...I haven't started the story yet, but I'm bracing myself for something depressing...
The thing is, a certain name stuck out from the blur of words. Rin. THAT'S MY NAME! EK!
Okay, not really, considering that I'm not Japanese (no matter how much I wish I was) and that my real name is MUCH MUCH longer.
But my friend had this BRILLIANT idea that our YouTube videos should use fake names because she's scared of cyberstalkers, so I agreed because, though I'm not afraid of cyberstalkers, my name is too embarrassing for me to use :(
So I use Rin...it's such a pretty name, and I heard it means "park" in Japanese...though someone told me it meant "cold"
ANYWAYS, I will now proceed to read the story.
OH NO! RYUU DON'T WALK AWAY! GO BACK TO HER!! CAN'T YOU SEE THAT SHE LOVES YOU?
Yeah...that was my reaction...gosh, I feel like I was watching a soap opera and yelling that the characters behind the screen...BUT THEY DIDN'T LISTEN TO ME!
*sob* *sniffle* *smile* *sob*
I made that up myself ^ *grins proudly*
Anyway, great story. I just don't understand what happened between Rin and this "David". Did he hurt her or something?
~DixieAusten (who is sorry for the stupidly long review, half of which probably doesn't even make sense =D)

wow...um nice story

This is depressing, and it's pretty good writing (the use of the word duplicate twice within two sentences irked me a bit, but that was all). However, even though it's depressing, it is still a good story. If this really did happen to you, I hope you feel better. (:
This is so fresh and awesome that I'm going to add it to my c2. I hope you don't mind. (: