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that one guy 2008-05-02 . chapter 1
true
Leaves of Labefaction 2008-05-01 . chapter 1
I really like it, especially the ending. There is one part I dont' like:

"And I’d give you a thousand hearts
(If I could)
To tell you I love you
But I only have one heart to give
And even if I did
Have a thousand hearts to give"

I think it could be just, "Even if I did have more," or "Even if I did have a thousand," because the repetitive-ness is kind of awkward.

-LoL
W. Griffin 2008-03-16 . chapter 1
that is depressing, but awesome!

-w. griffin
mangotangokitty 2008-03-14 . chapter 1
it was so happy...and then the last three lines happened
Innocent Tears 2007-11-27 . chapter 1
This poem is so sweet, you are an amazing poet!
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