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| that one guy 2008-05-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseid love to help but im not a writer, i can barely spell |
| Leaves of Labefaction 2008-04-06 ch 1,  | abuseVery good. I like it. Especially the last lines. How sweet... -LoL |
| Moon-Chaser 2007-12-02 ch 1, | abuseI like this, the way that you go through all the different ways that this girl will be noticed. I like that. I hope that you do more. I also like the way you italic some of the lines it adds a new tone to the piece. Keep it up and thanks for reviewing |