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that one guy 2008-05-02 . chapter 1
id love to help but im not a writer, i can barely spell
Leaves of Labefaction 2008-04-06 . chapter 1
Very good. I like it. Especially the last lines. How sweet...

-LoL
Moon-Chaser 2007-12-02 . chapter 1
I like this, the way that you go through all the different ways that this girl will be noticed. I like that. I hope that you do more. I also like the way you italic some of the lines it adds a new tone to the piece.

Keep it up and thanks for reviewing
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