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| Lady Fingers 2007-12-23 ch 1,  | abusei'm humming on to your lyrical beauty |
| fairytale failure 2007-11-27 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is great. The chorus has a great hook - I hear it with a bit of a modern or r&b rhythm, and it sounds like it would be very easy to get stuck in your head. My favourite verse was number two; I really liked the first and third lines where you listed things, especially 'broken wings, bits of string, the things you'd paint' |