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| lost for words 2007-11-27 ch 1,  | abuseI think the last line makes the haiku. Nice work. |
| Artemis Anderson 2007-11-27 ch 1, | abusenicely done. short and somehow simple, but in a good way. great job d:) |
| TheInsaneDoc 2007-11-27 ch 1, | abuseHey, that was great. I rather enjoyed the imagery, it gave me an instant mental picture :) |
| Cbear9894 2007-11-27 ch 1, | abuseIt is okay, but you might want to think of lengthening it... |
| Calicien 2007-11-27 ch 1, | abuseHaikus always make my day. :) |