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| Frenchie-chan 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abuseWhoa... You really have a way with words. This is quite impressive. Why havn't you published this?! You're definetly good enough to! Your style is amazing, and it reminds me a lot of Langston Hughes. Very nice. Bravo! God Bless, Frenchie-chan |
| Featherfall 2008-02-25 ch 1, | abuseOh, my head, too many big words. I'm not sure I really got a good idead of what this. I guess I'll reread it. I guess it wouldn't hurt to expand my vocabulary either. Thanks for the review! Bye. |
| kelloggs256 2007-12-03 ch 1, | abuseI enjoyed this peom, although some of the mythological references went right over my head, but thanks to school and having read some of Dante's Inferno, I did understand some references that you made. A deathly poem, with a sickly sweet flavor...nice. |
| Chidori Nadare 2007-11-30 ch 1, | abuseI agree with the previous reviewers (Doc Blood and Princess Anna) that you have great vocabulary and you sure know your mythology. This is very fantasy like. Nice work... -C.N |
| Doc Blood 2007-11-28 ch 1, | abuseYeah. What Princess Anna said. I'm gonna have to get out my thesaurus and mythology texts for a better understanding of this one. Cryptic, beautiful, frightening, and peaceful. Are you a recovering Catholic too? Beautifully done. Peace, Doc |
| Princess-anna57 2007-11-28 ch 1, | abuseWow, so intelligent sounding. I admire your vocabulary, which is much above most poetry here. GREAT work. Write on! ~Anna~ ^_^ |