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Frenchie-chan
2008-03-08
ch 1,
abuseWhoa...
You really have a way with words. This is quite impressive. Why havn't you published this?! You're definetly good enough to! Your style is amazing, and it reminds me a lot of Langston Hughes. Very nice.
Bravo!
God Bless,
Frenchie-chan
Featherfall
2008-02-25
ch 1,
abuseOh, my head, too many big words. I'm not sure I really got a good idead of what this. I guess I'll reread it. I guess it wouldn't hurt to expand my vocabulary either.
Thanks for the review!
Bye.
kelloggs256
2007-12-03
ch 1,
abuseI enjoyed this peom, although some of the mythological references went right over my head, but thanks to school and having read some of Dante's Inferno, I did understand some references that you made. A deathly poem, with a sickly sweet flavor...nice.
Chidori Nadare
2007-11-30
ch 1,
abuseI agree with the previous reviewers (Doc Blood and Princess Anna) that you have great vocabulary and you sure know your mythology. This is very fantasy like. Nice work...

-C.N
Doc Blood
2007-11-28
ch 1,
abuseYeah. What Princess Anna said. I'm gonna have to get out my thesaurus and mythology texts for a better understanding of this one. Cryptic, beautiful, frightening, and peaceful. Are you a recovering Catholic too? Beautifully done.

Peace, Doc
Princess-anna57
2007-11-28
ch 1,
abuseWow, so intelligent sounding. I admire your vocabulary, which is much above most poetry here. GREAT work. Write on!

~Anna~ ^_^
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