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| Cross Rose 2008-02-03 ch 1,  | abuseOh my god...that was truly beautiful, where did you get this beautiful idea from? I loved it all, I loved the beginning, when her best friend gave her a gift, since it meant 'end'. Whenever I were to give someone something, I always felt like our friendship was already dying, the end of it all ( nothing tragic ever happened though ( such as the story ) ). And, it was. Sorry to babble like that, anyway~~ I really loved that, and ever since then, the girl hated getting gift's, for it reminded her of that one day, I truly loved that... ~~Cross Rose |
| Carousel Chorus 2007-11-29 ch 1, | abuseThis is beautiful, amazing job! Thanks for the review! |
| Jesspuggy 2007-11-28 ch 1, | abuseWell, that was different. I was hooked from the beginning, even though the first sentence threw me off. Seems like 'gives me a wrapped package' would sound a little more correct, but maybe you did that on purpose. I really enjoyed it, though. |
| EbonyANDIvory 2007-11-28 ch 1, | abuseAww thats so sad... At first i wasn't going to read all of it 'cause i got a little bored, but i so glad i did. Teally good i like it a lot! |