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| simpleplan13 2007-11-28 ch 1, | abuselol to the note... the piece is great.. its an interesting metaphor and i love the last line |
| wrapped-in-porcelain 2007-11-28 ch 1, | abusethis was incredibly powerful. great analogy. i love it. |
| Ksi'Roden 2007-11-28 ch 1, | abuseThat provides some magnificent imagery. This poem really grabs me because it's how I've been feeling about my own life lately, and this puts that feeling into very colorful words. |