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Reviews For: An Accident Waiting to Happen

simpleplan13
2007-11-28
ch 1,
abuselol to the note... the piece is great.. its an interesting metaphor and i love the last line
wrapped-in-porcelain
2007-11-28
ch 1,
abusethis was incredibly powerful. great analogy.
i love it.
Ksi'Roden
2007-11-28
ch 1,
abuseThat provides some magnificent imagery. This poem really grabs me because it's how I've been feeling about my own life lately, and this puts that feeling into very colorful words.
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