konban wa

I love that this rhymes. It seemed to work perfectly with it -- the simplicity of a rhyme with such a heavy topic. Death. Rhyming. They seem almost like antonyms in a way... *shrug* Beautifully haunting. I loved it. :D

Zaijen
-Shan-

Wow, this poem is so powerfully piercing to the heart. Well said. It's so sad though. Thank you for sharing. Write on.

~Anna~ ^_^