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HauntedMisery
2008-02-04
ch 1,
abuseThis is BEAUTIFUL.
I love this.
A Minion Named Onion
2008-01-18
ch 1,
abusei so totally agree with MacKitty on this one. but the way i don't understand it just makes me read it again...and again...and again...and again! not without hoping of understanding, but also falling in love with it.
amazingly sensual, what an attack.
sylvia's syndrome
2007-12-25
ch 1,
abuseThe way you use words is bold and, I think, very brave. You censor no emotion or thought; the honesty of your writing is part of what makes it so appealing. Your diction is out of this world. Every word is a stroke of brilliance; the combined effect of your poem is almost blinding. You are very gifted. I loved this, especially the last stanza. Thanks for posting.
dress her up in fairytales
2007-12-12
ch 1,
abuseah, the first few lines are definitely intoxicating.
the mere mention of crushed velvet makes me wish i had in my hands right now so i can remember and touch the texture.
shadows of a trackless sea
2007-12-08
ch 1,
abuseWonderfully written. Very interesting metaphors, but all in al hauntingly beautiful. ~S.S.
Fan Fan
2007-12-08
ch 1,
abuseAmazing metaphors :) artful
MacKitty
2007-11-30
ch 1,
abusei think your poems are completely amazing, though a lot of the time i don't understand what they're saying. i just like the way you put the words together. it feels...good. haha. so mysterious.

see ya
cocaine and cherries
2007-11-30
ch 1,
abuseoh. i'm completely at a loss. this was breathtaking.
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