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| HauntedMisery 2008-02-04 ch 1, | abuseThis is BEAUTIFUL. I love this. |
| A Minion Named Onion 2008-01-18 ch 1, | abusei so totally agree with MacKitty on this one. but the way i don't understand it just makes me read it again...and again...and again...and again! not without hoping of understanding, but also falling in love with it. amazingly sensual, what an attack. |
| sylvia's syndrome 2007-12-25 ch 1, | abuseThe way you use words is bold and, I think, very brave. You censor no emotion or thought; the honesty of your writing is part of what makes it so appealing. Your diction is out of this world. Every word is a stroke of brilliance; the combined effect of your poem is almost blinding. You are very gifted. I loved this, especially the last stanza. Thanks for posting. |
| dress her up in fairytales 2007-12-12 ch 1, | abuseah, the first few lines are definitely intoxicating. the mere mention of crushed velvet makes me wish i had in my hands right now so i can remember and touch the texture. |
| shadows of a trackless sea 2007-12-08 ch 1, | abuseWonderfully written. Very interesting metaphors, but all in al hauntingly beautiful. ~S.S. |
| Fan Fan 2007-12-08 ch 1, | abuseAmazing metaphors :) artful |
| MacKitty 2007-11-30 ch 1, | abusei think your poems are completely amazing, though a lot of the time i don't understand what they're saying. i just like the way you put the words together. it feels...good. haha. so mysterious. see ya |
| cocaine and cherries 2007-11-30 ch 1, | abuseoh. i'm completely at a loss. this was breathtaking. |