I really like the way this story is going so far. I can kind of relate to Kate...I know how it feels when the guy you're basically in love with has no clue you exist. I'd love to finish what you have so far tonight, but seeing as it's 1:30am here and I have to work tomorrow, that may not be to wise...

yay!!
i like kate.
jimmys a bit of an **. but thats okay.
update??

I had forgotten what was going on so I had to go re-read the last chapter and when I got to this one I was like "Oh, I get it!"

^.^

I liked this chapter!

Oh, wow. Just finished chap. 6...this has to go on my alert list! Keep adding ;) I can't wait to find out what happens next.

he should feel sorry! hitting her in the face like that. sheesh. no, i'm kidding. awesome chapter! i'm looking forward to the next!

Very nice. The very beginning is a tad confusing but I like this alot...I have 2 go read the next chapter. I feel bad for the girl...

Poor thing, he really broke her heart!

Awesome chapter!

Awesome chapter!

I love your style of writing, for some reason It's very refrehing and unique to me.

love this! i can't believe i didn't see this earlier. well, actually i had, but i sort of ignored it. shame on me! this is great! write more!

*SiGh* (-.-)"

This is like a sail boat slowly sailing the calm sea.

It's smooth and well viewed for the readers.

There's just one point I would like to say: when it comes to the part when they need to speak their thought, would you italize them or just use apostrophes to quote them?

If I fully understand, the "i/" or "/" means their thoughts, right? (-.-)*sigh*

Would you mind if I Alert this story? It's exotict and the first time I would read a new nice plot as this one...

Keep it aimming!XD
-catherine_kate-

Good chapter :) I dunno why, but it really moved me. Hehe, that sounds so corny. The message was powerful. That is, if there WAS a message :P Looking forward to the next chapter!

Aw poor Kate. Stupid David. *kicks him* He was really nasty.
Good work, keep it up! =)

This chapter was a little more personal with the characters, which is really good. I like how you make James' mind work. He seems like he could be a nice guy. I like how none of your characters (so far) are MarySues, like how you didn't make Kate a skinny and beautiful misunderstood outcast. That would be a total cliche. This is going great. Update soon!

I really like how your POv is written in this. It's not as personal as most, but it's distant enough to seem kinda cool. Anyways, please update soon!

Great start. I like it. It's different, and Kate sounds uncannily like me. Really, it's scary. Except I don't eat chicken =D
Can't wait to continue reading!