it's interesting how you described her father at the beginning. if i hadn't read the summary, i would have thought catrinka was much older and the man in question was a potential love interest.

oh, and i didn't realize why it was titled "electra" until much later (i'm a little slow... ;p) but it's an accurate allusion. and as usual, the description was exquisite - that last paragraph was beautiful =]

oh, very, very good. you really capture this innocent young girl and her...interesting...relationship with her father. loved your descriptions and a very well done piece on the whole, though very much tinged with sadness...especially the end.