Reviews for In The Eye of the Beholder

DeeFective 2008-07-06 ch 1,	abuseOoh, I liked this piece a lot. I love how it has an eerie feel to it. I also love the all the metaphors you put into it. Very good job.
simpleplan13 2008-02-29 ch 1,	abuseI like this a lot... the formatting with the dark and light and how the first and last stanza relate is really awesome.. I also like the contrasts in the second stanza although I dont think the repetition of and is necessary and I kinda wish the last line was another contrast... I also loved the line "and your soul hangs on your sleeve"
AuthorLittle 2007-12-05 ch 1, anon.	abuseStrange...maybe a little too cryptic? I love crypticism (sp?) but, as Gary Marshall (sp?) said, "Be cryptic clearly." Or something like that...
Andrea Roycee 2007-11-28 ch 1,	abuseTHis poem was somewhat dark, but it wasn't bad dark it was good dark if that makes any sense. I liked your word usage. Good write.
softer side of apples 2007-11-28 ch 1,	abuseBravo!! I really love this poem especially the last line " And lost souls disembark" that was so powerful to me..
poisonedpassions. 2007-11-28 ch 1,	abuseVery cleverly written. I really enjoyed reading this. Excellent. Keep writing. **.
J.L. Hastings 2007-11-28 ch 1,	abuseThat...was...AMAZING! Seriously. I loved it. Great job! ^_^