Hey!

Okay, basically all I can say is that you need to redo this and put a lot more thoughts into it. You have a good storyline but you need to update!

And there's a stain on the window and that intrigues me!

I would say rewrite this. It's got a good plotline but I can see where it needs work. But it was a NaNoWriMo. I did that in 2007. It was an enjoyable experience but I had decided not to do it in 2008. Too much work. =P I like to write stories at my own pace.

But anyway, rewrite this!

Hey! I do like this. There's the strange thing about the asylum though. It's not up to standards. But I guess this is 1970.

Aidan's got a good view of things. He seems very perceptive to me and is different. I can see that. As for the thoughts of suicide, well I'm guessing he'll try something.

I like this.

I loved the discription of the picture that he drew for her...that was cute!
And who knows about the situation of their living status...i doubt that they actually do that considering what just went on with Anya and Aidan. And with more time they will continue to have together...hm things can get a little interesting lol hahaha...well those are my thoughts anyways.

Great update...and now im going to go and write another chpt! Hahaha...just got inspired!

I'll just wait for ur next update! :)

Wow...is all I can say seriously! Im sorry if u wanted me to look for errors i wasnt really paying attention cuz i was to caught up in the story. I really enjoyed reading it and I can not wait for ur next update! Thnk u again for reading mine. :)